Example

Example report · English ⇄ Persian

Fictional example. Scores and deductions are illustrative.

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MARKS LOST · −5

Segment 1 · English → Persian

SOURCE

Hello. I would like to book a table for four people on Friday.

YOUR RENDITION

سلام. می‌خواهم یک میز برای چهار نفر رزرو کنم.

Omitted −1

The day, Friday, is missing. The number of guests is preserved.

MODEL RENDITION

سلام. می‌خواهم برای جمعه یک میز برای چهار نفر رزرو کنم.

Segment 2 · English ← Persian

SOURCE

حتماً. میز داخل را ترجیح می‌دهید یا بیرون؟

YOUR RENDITION

Certainly. Would you prefer a table inside or outside?

Retained 0

The choice between an inside and an outside table is preserved.

MODEL RENDITION

Certainly. Would you prefer a table inside or outside?

Segment 3 · English → Persian

SOURCE

Outside, please. The booking is under Maya Green.

YOUR RENDITION

بیرون، لطفاً. رزرو به نام مایا براون است.

Distorted −1

The surname Green was changed to Brown; the booking name no longer matches.

MODEL RENDITION

بیرون، لطفاً. رزرو به نام مایا گرین است.

Segment 4 · English ← Persian

SOURCE

میز ساعت شش و نیم عصر در دسترس است.

YOUR RENDITION

The table is available at six fifteen in the evening.

Distorted −2

Six thirty (18:30) became six fifteen (18:15), changing the booking time by 15 minutes.

MODEL RENDITION

The table is available at six thirty in the evening.

Segment 5 · English → Persian

SOURCE

That works for us. Is there a booking fee?

YOUR RENDITION

این ساعت برای ما مناسب است. آیا رزرو ده دلار هزینه دارد؟

Added −1

Ten dollars was added. The source asks whether a fee exists, without giving an amount.

MODEL RENDITION

این ساعت برای ما مناسب است. آیا رزرو هزینه‌ای دارد؟

Segment 6 · English ← Persian

SOURCE

نه، رزرو هزینه‌ای ندارد. جمعه می‌بینیمتان.

YOUR RENDITION

No, there is no booking fee. We will see you on Friday.

Retained 0

Both the absence of a fee and the Friday meeting are preserved.

MODEL RENDITION

No, there is no booking fee. We will see you on Friday.